Feedback on Final Magazine

Susana - 16 years old: 
"There is a strong colour scheme throughout the magazine which makes it look more professional. The front page has good use of bold, eye catching sell lines which makes it appealing to an audience. The contents page is laid out in an easy to read format with the most popular stories on a larger scale to make it easier for readers to find the pages they are looking for. The use of interesting pictures on all pages of the double page spreads makes the target audience more willing to continue reading the article along with the bold pull quotes. Overall, a very professional, well-made magazine." 

Filipa: 14 years old: 
"I like your colour scheme, it is very bold and stands out. Also the use of different bands photos on the contents page are primary photos which is good as it clearly shows you have put effort into taking the photos as you can clearly see who the bands are. Finally the small photos on the double page spreads are laid out nicely and look really effective."

After receiving this feedback I believed that I had met the needs and expectations of my target audience as they found my magazine easy to navigate and found the use of photos and pull quotes interesting.